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pilvikki
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“A male suspect approached the vehicle on the passenger side of the vehicle and starts to fire at the male deceased, who was just getting into the vehicle,” said Giroux. “Unfortunately, the male deceased was shot and is dead and the female, who was seating in the back of the vehicle and who never got out of the vehicle, is also deceased.”
I cannot fathom this kind of writing. I really can not.
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I doubt that you will see that kind of reporting in the New York Times. Do you have an idea where it came from?
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Someone's got a very poor grasp of grammar.
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http://www.citynews.ca/2016/04/29/man-a ... -shooting/

the whole article is inexcusable!

and how's this for logic:
Paramedics said a man and woman were rushed to hospital without vital signs and both succumbed to their injuries in hospital.
if you have no vital signs, changes are you've already succumbed before you ever got near the hospital. and the vehicle seen driving southbound?

good grief, what a total cluster!
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:eek:

:facepalm:

That had me shaking my head!
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